tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11539948.post9181271625899889776..comments2024-03-20T16:46:13.343-04:00Comments on Marly Youmans / The Palace at 2:00 a.m. / poems, stories, novels: TweetheadsMarly Youmanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02377938366750387442noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11539948.post-10814480789899964112012-07-19T16:15:39.408-04:002012-07-19T16:15:39.408-04:00Did you look at the picture? Didn't look so ba...Did you look at the picture? Didn't look so bad! XDMarly Youmanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02377938366750387442noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11539948.post-14091340405550183142012-07-19T15:37:33.668-04:002012-07-19T15:37:33.668-04:00Sounds exciting Marly. RE: the early bra, I would ...Sounds exciting Marly. RE: the early bra, I would bet it was not too comfortable.Robbi N.https://www.blogger.com/profile/04881145195435485238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11539948.post-43236251617075887332012-07-19T12:59:24.254-04:002012-07-19T12:59:24.254-04:00Hope so--I somehow prefer "Pride and Prejudic...Hope so--I somehow prefer "Pride and Prejudice and Cthulu with Lobsters" or whatever it was...Marly Youmanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02377938366750387442noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11539948.post-54979583540472157842012-07-19T11:57:37.390-04:002012-07-19T11:57:37.390-04:00From the examples of the re-writes given, I would ...From the examples of the re-writes given, I would say that this is far from erotic. Just plain mundane.<br />There is a saying I think of that describes how erotic literature is erotic. "Always leave them wanting more." This works for desert also. And never having QUITE enough of a favorite dish to serve everyone (there are always other choices, of course!)<br />Works for the eroticPaul Digbyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13872829068371700917noreply@blogger.com